What do you think of this poem i wrote?

A poem should be about feelings and emotions. This you accomplished very well. The only thing I noticed is that you started out to have rhyme, but some of the verses do not have that and finished up with rhyme. But I think it is a very good poem - direct and about what you need and want to feel, as well as what you expect from him. Out of five stars, I would rate it as a four. Keep up the good work.